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Out with the Old

A Poem on letting go of attachments

By Michelle LiewPublished 17 days ago Updated 15 days ago 1 min read
Top Story - May 2024
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Out with the Old
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Have you persisted at tasks or relationships, though the labours hardly bore fruit? We hang on to things that no longer serve any purpose because we have an attachment to them. 

So, we try to let go of the attachments that no longer hold any use. But what are the signs that we should disconnect from what we hold on to too tightly? You'd have persistent negative feelings. There would be a lack of reciprocity - you wouldn't gain anything from them.  You'd find it hard to move forward, and grow.The attachment may even prompt unhealthy habits. 

If there is an attachment affecting you in this way, why not show it the door?  Enjoy these rhyming couplets. 

Out with the old, to bring in the new, 

Throw the old jeans that make us blue

Out with the old, frayed top hat

Black, dirt-ridden, does not give back

Out with the pack of infertile soil

Plants won't grow, though you toil

Out with the cheesecake you overeat

And the chocolate that's too sweet

Out with the old, in  with the new

The old should go, to oneself be true.

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About the Creator

Michelle Liew

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • Esala Gunathilake11 days ago

    Congratulations on your top story.

  • Gerard DiLeo13 days ago

    Yea, but not the reel-to-reel tape deck. Just everything else.

  • D. D. Lee15 days ago

    Nice poem. I like to be consistent with decluttering my life. Congrats on Top Story!

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Andrea Corwin 15 days ago

    Congratulations on TS!! ❣️

  • Gloria Penelope15 days ago

    Great story. Congratulations on TS!

  • Rachel Deeming15 days ago

    Excellent! I love those rhyming couplets especially the cheesecake/chocolate combo.

  • I suck big time at letting go, lol. Loved your poem!

  • Andrea Corwin 17 days ago

    Wonderful!! So perfect - I loved it. 😍

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