We were almost holding hands
Lying on a blanket in a strange shape
Under the night sky
In the silence of nature
I asked you where Mars was
You immediately pointed up into the northern hemisphere
I was aware of my free hand playing with blades of grass
Wondering what it would feel like to be holding your hand
How you loved the sun. The moon. The stars. The universe.
The red planet so far away awaiting the green comet
This once in a lifetime experience so rare
So unusual
Just like you and me.
I was like the sun, you were like the moon
Circling around in our own orbits
Our emotions passing like comets around Mars
Do you know how I feel about you?
Do I know how you feel about me….
Waiting like we always do
Just waiting.
About the Creator
Debbi Lonmon
I am a musician/songwriter and practicing story teller.
I also love poetry and creative writing.
It's wonderful to be part of a group like this. Wish I'd joined sooner:-)
Comments (2)
I still love this!!! 💕💕💞
Excellent work... I love it Debbi...!!!