Quadru-haiku

Letting go

By Debbi LonmonPublished about a year ago • Updated about a year ago • 1 min read

Laguna Beach

Saw it in your eyes

like a fire on a mountain

a soft silent rage

Felt it in your smile

a reflection of myself

salt water that burns

Touched by your silence

your dreamy unspoken words

shook my hidden world

It was your breathing

the air I craved and chocked on

exhaling goodbye

I am a musician/songwriter and practicing story teller.

I also love poetry and creative writing.

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