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Fragmented Bonds
**Hi! I would love some feedback on this flash fiction please: I will be rewriting and submitting using your suggestions on 5/3**
Prisoner in your own life
Whether it is a result of the choices you made, the consequences of those of your parents or rather the result of the fate handed to you by the universe, it is possible for you to be a prisoner in your own life. You might be wondering how is it possible to be a prisoner in your own life, the first question would rather be what is a prisoner? Or what does it mean to be a prisoner?
Old Typewriter
This critique and acrostic poem will show readers why I chose this image for most of my writing. Old-fashioned typing mode for the sound it made clickity-clack or something like that.
Mark GrahamPublished 2 months ago in CritiqueWould You Read These Stories Based on These Blurbs?
For the record, none of these are actual stories, just fun ideas I came up with while I'm working on my book's blurb right now and thought, hey, this is fun. I want to make some more. 🤣
April
(this is a novel idea I have, and this is the beginning that came to me and I would love to know if this gets your interest. Of course, any other critique is also welcome. Do you like the first person, or would you prefer the third person? I am thinking of adding names, and a little more history but I want to see if this is even a start that is interesting.)
Critiques Needed: First pages of Project Styx
Authors note: I would like constructive critiques on the first pages of a sci-fi fantasy book I am working on. I would like to know first impressions and things that need to be worked on. This is so I can get an idea of what an agent or editor might think. I also know that this is long—no need to read the whole thing, in fact, tell me when you lose interest.
K. KocheryanPublished 4 months ago in CritiqueMy Coworker, Death
Death and I work very closely, but never together I see death in passing about once a week, but we've never actually met. For most people death is an obscure thought, something that rarely crosses the mind. For others, it is the prominent shadow that runs past our peripherals. Tonight, death worked over time. He was not a blur that ran past as I was turning away, but was a prominent shadow in the room I stood in and the floor beneath me. I didn't see him at first, he's easy to miss if you want to. My focus was on the muddy veins of my patient's right arm, attempting to finagle one last good one to draw from. It was never my forte, but when I did get it, I enjoyed watching the smooth red liquid collect into the tubes; the simple movement of it was relaxing to me in a sense. It was a reward, an earning for my blind pokes that eventually caught what I was looking for.
Kelsey WindsPublished 6 months ago in CritiqueTeenage Mutant Ninja Turtles
Finally, I have watched the new retake 🎬🍿of the movie 🎦 “Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles”. These were a few things that Stood out to me:
HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 8 months ago in Critique
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Exploring the Impact of Wattpad Fanfiction Adaptations: The Pros and Cons of Bringing Teen Fan Works to the Big Screen
In today's digital age, the line between creator and consumer has become increasingly blurred, thanks in part to platforms like Wattpad, where aspiring writers can share their stories with a global audience. Fanfiction, a genre born out of fandom, and arguably parasocial culture, has thrived on Wattpad, offering writers an outlet to explore their favorite characters and universes in new and imaginative ways. With the rise of fanfiction's popularity, particularly among Generation Z, there has been growing interest in adapting these fan works into films. In this article, we'll examine the pros and cons of turning Wattpad fanfiction into movies and explore how this trend reflects Generation Z's propensity to overshare on the internet.
The Evolution of Spider-Man on Screen: From Personability to a cog in the machine
Since swinging onto the comic book scene in 1962, Spider-Man has captivated audiences with his relatable struggles, witty banter, and unwavering sense of responsibility. Over the years, the character has undergone numerous cinematic adaptations, each offering a unique interpretation of the iconic web-slinger. In this article, we delve into the three major Spider-Man film series: Sam Raimi's "Spider-Man" trilogy (2002-2007), Marc Webb's "The Amazing Spider-Man" duology (2012-2014), and Marvel Studios' integration of Spider-Man into the Marvel Cinematic Universe (MCU) (2016-present). Through a comparative analysis of these films, we'll explore how the evolution of Spider-Man on screen reflects Marvel's shift from intimate storytelling to blockbuster spectacle, and its impact on viewer engagement and connection.
"Feedback Frontier"
In the dynamic city of Horizonville, where imagination exceeded all rational limitations and creative articulation flourished, there carried on with a youthful essayist named Alex. Enthusiastically for narrating and a yearn for new encounters, Alex set out on an excursion through the Input Boondocks — a local area of essayists, specialists, and makers who looked to push the limits of their art by investigating inventive skylines through valuable criticism and joint effort.
Natalie A. SmithPublished 2 days ago in CritiqueWhat is the most dangerous weapon in the world?
⚔️🏹🔪🔫🗡️⚔️🏹🔪🔫🗡️⚔️🏹🔪🔫🗡️⚔️🏹🔪🔫🗡️ When I asked someone a question, "What is the most dangerous weapon in the world?", They searched Google and found some information about it. And then they said it must be a 'nuclear weapon'. However, in reality, the most dangerous weapon is considered to be 'IDEOLOGY'.
“Wordsmith's Odyssey”
In the clamoring city of Veritas where stories were basically as bountiful as the stars in the night sky, there carried on with a youthful scribe named Oliver. From a young age, Oliver was charmed by the force of words, winding around stories that moved perusers to far off domains and mixed feelings profound inside their souls. Notwithstanding, Oliver knew that to genuinely refine his specialty, he wanted the priceless endowment of inventive input.
Natalie A. SmithPublished 2 days ago in Critique"Artistic Endeavors"
In the dynamic city of Creativa, where each corner reverberated with the murmurs of imaginative motivation, there carried on with a youthful painter named Sophia. With a heart overflowing with enthusiasm and a brain loaded up with dreams, Sophia left on a mission for flawlessness in her creative undertakings.
Natalie A. SmithPublished 2 days ago in Critique“Echoes of insight”
Settled in a curious town lined by moving slopes and murmuring streams, there carried on with a youthful essayist named Emily. She had forever been enamored by the force of words, winding around stories that moved perusers to far away grounds and contacted the profundities of their souls. In any case, Emily knew that to genuinely sharpen her art, she wanted the direction and criticism of individual essayists.
Natalie A. SmithPublished 2 days ago in Critique5 characteristics of a democratic country
The Cornerstones of Democracy: Five Defining Characteristics Democracy, a system of government that empowers the people, isn't a singular concept. It's a complex tapestry woven from several key characteristics. While there are many variations in how these characteristics are implemented, understanding these core principles is crucial to recognizing a true democracy. Here, we'll delve into five fundamental elements that define a democratic nation:
Moharif YuliantoPublished 3 days ago in Critique
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