Faith.
Stressed by
Tearful cries,
Screaming prayers,
Desperate and haunted,
By nightmares, forever
Terrified of demons, cowed
In the shadows. We'll never be
Safe from Judgement, with horrid preachers
Teaching kids hell, so their religion stays
Relevant, their greedy churches exist,
Because they took from us. They remain
Freed 0f false pretenses. We need
A moment to breathe. We live,
Desperate to be allowed
Happiness. We're not
Giving our lives
Their vile faith,
Absent
Love
About the Creator
Kenny Penn
Thanks for reading! I enjoy writing in various genres, my favorites being horror/thriller and dark/epic fantasies. I'll also occasionally drop a poem or two.
For a list of all my work, and to connect with me, go to www.kennypenn.com
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Comments (11)
Very well written, expressive and smooth.
This was like an outline of my mind regarding " brick and mortar" churches these days..or had it always been this way and I just opened my 👀!? Excellent Kenny!
I loved this so much, It felt like letting out a long breathe
Whoaaaa, this was so incredible! It reads so well both ways! Well done!
This hot really close to home for me, as I was raised in an extreme baptist religion. The fear of hell was Instilled in me from a child. I never could agree with the belief, but the trauma of it still affects me today. Great job on this piece!
Well done, Kenny! Inverse AND Etheree! Wow! That takes talent and patience!
Very well done!
Wow kenny this packs a punch and such a clever inverse! 🤍
Oof, powerful stuff! 👌
Excellent!
Writing these poems are not in my wheel house , so I appreciate when others, like yourself, do such a great job.