Today I Returned from Rome
a true story haiku*
Home from Rome~
sixty-five photographs
One bead of dew
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Here are 56 of them...
* Correct. The syllable count is non-conforming.
** Yes. There is a joke to be found here.
Love to all.
CJ
xx
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Caroline Jane
Warm-blooded vertebrate, domesticated with a preference for the wild. Howls at the moon and forages on the dark side of it. Laughs like a hyena. Fuelled by good times and fairy dust. Writes obsessively with no holes barred.
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I chuckled at this - brilliant!
It is a beautiful bead of dew. And now it has its own haiku too. Sort of. You're like a modern day Keats! 😉
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Gosh I laughed at this soooooo muchhhhhh!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
This was fun! I love that this isn't the typical syllable count for a haiku because it adds to the overall character and charm of this piece. This reminds me of an inside joke my parents have where every time they go on a hike my mom has to stop and take 100 pictures of flowers and she doesn't even like flowers... Hahah! I'm not sure it makes sense why it's funny, it's just one of those things!
And that bead is special!!❤️
Oh my, I have so been here.
Yo~Cj — Didja leave ‘Them-Italians’ NoodleLess 🍝 Then…! Jk🌺
Loved your nature poem!!!