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THE WHISPER OF –
Who?
Yes, I can see you. How could I not?
You come here to visit, oh! quite a lot!
You won’t come inside. Is that too much to ask?
Are you so afraid? Is it too much of a task?
You won’t join the others that surround me each day.
But, then, maybe your visit isn’t for play.
If you have a message, please let me know.
You come here for hours, but then, I see you go.
Never to linger! No, that wouldn’t be you.
All I see is the white smoky whisper of –
Who?
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About the Creator
Margaret Brennan
I am a 77-year old grandmother who loves to write, fish, and grab my camera to capture the beautiful scenery I see around me.
My husband and I found our paradise in Punta Gorda Florida where the weather always keeps us guessing.
Comments (3)
That was a beautiful poem.
Margaret, methinks the visitor is our thoughts whispering about aging. I am up there too, and each day, I cannot believe it. This is a thought-provoking poem that should make everyone think because the years fly by. Bravo!
Seeing those ghosts again?