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THE WHISPER OF -

Who?

By Margaret BrennanPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
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THE WHISPER OF –

Who?

Yes, I can see you. How could I not?

You come here to visit, oh! quite a lot!

You won’t come inside. Is that too much to ask?

Are you so afraid? Is it too much of a task?

You won’t join the others that surround me each day.

But, then, maybe your visit isn’t for play.

If you have a message, please let me know.

You come here for hours, but then, I see you go.

Never to linger! No, that wouldn’t be you.

All I see is the white smoky whisper of –

Who?

fact or fiction
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About the Creator

Margaret Brennan

I am a 77-year old grandmother who loves to write, fish, and grab my camera to capture the beautiful scenery I see around me.

My husband and I found our paradise in Punta Gorda Florida where the weather always keeps us guessing.

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  • Murali16 days ago

    That was a beautiful poem.

  • Lacy Loar-Gruenler2 months ago

    Margaret, methinks the visitor is our thoughts whispering about aging. I am up there too, and each day, I cannot believe it. This is a thought-provoking poem that should make everyone think because the years fly by. Bravo!

  • Shirley Belk2 months ago

    Seeing those ghosts again?

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