EVOLUTION
for the eclipse challenge
Exciting experience nature's event, the eclipse
calms crowds and stirs emotions.
Laugh, love, live life
in
positivity.
Spiritual stimulation
enterwined evermore.
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Writer's notes: Thank you for reading. You are appreaciated.
My acrostic poem was written for Vocal's the eclipse challenge.
The prompt, " Write an acrostic poem using this word: eclipse.
On April 8, 2024, a total solar eclipse will cross North America, passing over Mexico, the United States, and Canada. An eclipse, a cosmic phenomenon and a word with multiple meanings, serves as the focal point of this challenge. We invite you to craft an acrostic poem using the word "eclipse." An acrostic poem is a form of poetry where the initial letters of each line spell out a word or message when read vertically.
The eclipse symbolizes not only the celestial event where one celestial body obscures another, but it also metaphorically signifies concealment, transformation, and even revelation."
About the Creator
Babs Iverson
Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.
Comments (27)
Excellent!!! Congrats on Top Story!!!
Well done!!! Great job, Babs!!!
Cherish the people around you because they make life worth living. Make the most of every day and live it to the fullest because we never know how much time we have left. I wish you good health, a bright future and a happy life. May you always be surrounded by love and support. 🙏🙏🙏
The eclipse should eclipse my age and make me 21 again. getting a do over sure sounds like fun. I hope you have fun watching it,
Really nice one. I heard about the eclipse and hope I can see videos of it since I don’t own the glasses to see it
Lovely poem Babs! "Laugh, Love, Live life", I try and do that every day! ❤
Yes! It is a ‘spiritual stimulation’! Excellent acrostic Babs. ☺️👏
Nice job Babs!!❤️😊💕
Beautiful and inspiring, Babs! Wonderful work 😍
Thanks for writing and sharing, Babs! I'm in 'catch up' mode with everything--including the prompts--so, this is the first I've heard about it and I appreciated your explanation at the end.
See...I am a miserable so and so a lot of the time and really probably focus on the sadness and darkness a lot. Then I read something by you Babs and there's that positivity...that brightness. Lovely work, Babs, seriously! :)
Incredible acrostic! Fantastic work Babs!! 💝😍😍
Your Acrostic was so wonderful! I loved it!
Lovely poem than makes you think. And I also loved that you included an A/N on the alternate meanings of Eclipse.
Very well written!!!
So cheerful! I'm excited for the eclipse as well. Loved it 💕
Lovely, Babs, such a hopeful piece. Good luck in the challenge!
Cleverly written Babs. Love it. 😊💕
Aw very lovely Babs 🤍
Well done!
Beautifully written. I can visualize your words!!!
This is wonderful. A great entry, Babs ☺️
Well done.
Beautifully written, Babs!
I love this line, Spiritual Stimulation. 🥰 Fabulous title 🥰🥰🥰