Longing squeezes the soul
Without the moon at the edge of the universe
The heart's lament grows restless
Screaming loudly but unheard
Street flowers in the dimness
Curling up sadly in the embrace of the night
Oh.... Night eclipse
Silent, desolate, carving memories of betrayal
Cold wind shrouded in darkness
My will is fulfilled
Eyes dimming
Drifting into sleep as the night arrives
About the Creator
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Keep reading
More stories from Jackmiko99 and writers in Poets and other communities.
Whispering Woods (2W)
In a land far, far away, nestled between the mountains and the sea, there lay a forest called the Whispering Woods. Legend had it that the trees in this forest whispered secrets of the past, present, and future to those who dared to venture within.
By Jackmiko9914 days ago in Fiction
Vocal & my relationship to publishing traditionally
Ever since my small writing beginnings, when I started writing on Vocal in February 2021, I had been in a truly terrible slump & funk when it came to my writing. I had so many unfinished projects, ideas, half finished manuscripts and first chapters that were going nowhere.
By Melissa Ingoldsby2 days ago in Motivation
Comments (2)
So beautiful and soft! Well written poem, great job!😊
Gorgeous lines. Well done!