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The Epitaph of Blood

A Short Story about Vietnam War

By Abdul QayyumPublished 14 days ago 4 min read
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The Epitaph of Blood

In the last stages of the Vietnam War, a disillusioned captain of Special Forces rebels against an oppressive commander, forcing his unit to fight a valiant battle for survival against both internal betrayal and external enemies.

Captain John Baker: A Special Forces commander traumatized by combat and plagued by war ghosts.

Sergeant Michael Sanchez: the unwavering lieutenant of Baker struggling under the weight of leadership.Greenhorn soldier Corporal Thomas "Rookie" Davis is facing the harsh reality of combat for the first time.Lieutenant Colonel William Crawford: Baker's despotic boss who is enamored of grandeur and unconcerned with the lives he leads.

Ngan: A committed Viet Cong fighter ferociously guarding her native territory.The Plunge: Set in the lush vegetation of the Vietnamese countryside in 1973, the drama takes its turn. After years of fighting, Captain John Baker is in charge of a Special Forces unit that is worn out. Rookie is thrown into the horrors of battle and sees a friend die. Lieutenant Colonel Crawford, an uncompromising leader more concerned with body counts than with strategic judgment, and Baker have disagreements.

Policies against Morality: Crawford assigns Baker a dangerous mission to take control of a critical enemy stronghold. Baker, convinced it's a trap, pushes for a different strategy. Ambition-driven, Crawford ignores Baker's cautions and threatens to court-martial him for disobedience. Baker struggles with making the decision to put his men's lives ahead of obedience.

Deception and Flight: Using a captured Viet Cong soldier as bait, Baker devises a bold plan. However, as the enemy plans ahead for their movements, the mission falls apart. Baker's battalion is surrounded by the Viet Cong when Crawford deserts them, putting his prestige before his soldiers.

Battle in the Wilds: Baker leads his allies in a last-ditch effort to survive. As they make their way through the dangerous jungle while being hunted by the enemy and plagued by visions of fallen comrades, Sanchez's leadership abilities are put to the test. From a scared new recruit to a soldier with war fatigues, Rookie changes.

An Unlikely Coalition: Led by the determined Viet Cong veteran Ngan, they take sanctuary in a covert village. At first antagonistic, Ngan acknowledges their common predicament and offers them temporary safety. A tenuous friendship develops between the villagers and the soldiers. Despite their different cultural backgrounds, Rookie and Ngan develop a mutual respect.

The troop is faced with a moral choice: escape the jungle by themselves or defend the villagers from Crawford's forces that are about to attack. Crawford sees the community as disposable and is trying to hide his abandoning of Baker's squad.

Baker and his friends decide to stand up for the people. Ngan uses the bush to their advantage as they lead a guerrilla resistance. They force Crawford's forces to retire after suffering severe casualties. Baker reveals Crawford's cowardice and lust for glory in the pivotal encounter.

Numerous villagers and troops, including Rookie and Sanchez, lose their life in the fierce combat. Wounded but alive, Ngan says goodbye to Baker, who leaves with a renewed respect for life and the harsh truths of combat. The movie ends with a menacing question: is this really the last massacre, or is this just another chapter in the never-ending cycle of violence? He disappears into the darkness of the bush.

The battle's aftermath causes wounds that might never completely heal. Haunted by the faces of those who surrendered to him, Baker struggles to cope with the loss among the ruins. The glaring hole left by Sanchez's departure is evidence of the price of leadership during a conflict.

Ngan is still unwavering in her resolve to lead her people through the post-conflict phase despite her wounds. Her relationship with Baker, which was developed in the furnace of war, goes beyond linguistic and ideological barriers. They grieve for the dead together and get ready for what lies ahead.

The gap between those who cherish honor and humanity and those who pursue glory at any cost grows as the battle continues. Some view Crawford as a martyr for a cause corrupted by politics and ambition, while others denounce his acts as the height of military hubris.

The recollections of their departed brothers serve as a somber reminder of the real cost of war for Baker and his remaining allies. The crucible of hardship has tempered their souls, leaving them damaged but un-shattered from their voyage.

Baker's future is still unknown as he vanishes into the thick jungle undergrowth. The question remains unanswered, a monument to the lasting impact of war. Will there ever be true peace, or are they destined to continue the violent cycle for many years to come?

The sound of their sacrifice reverberates across the jungle in the quiet moments that follow, a somber hymn to the departed. There is yet a glimmer of hope among the confusion, bloodshed, and instability of war: that one day, someplace, there will be no more bloodshed and there will be peace.

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Abdul Qayyum

I am retired professor of English Language. I am fond of writing articles and short stories . I also wrote books on amazon kdp. My first Language is Urdu and I tried my best to teach my students english language ,

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