Fiction logo

Once More Unto The Breach

A Short Story

By Matthew FrommPublished 14 days ago Updated 14 days ago 2 min read
Top Story - May 2024
32

He let the sword slip through his other gauntleted hand. Athlistan stood atop the crest of the rubble of Bordanium’s ruptured curtain wall. Beyond, the remnants of the Saxon’s first assault regrouped. They would come again–Athlistan knew it.

As a flaming ball of pitch streaked comet-like above—a harbinger of what was to come, he removed his helm, metal hinge broken at the jaw where it caught a wayward blow.

Blood and grime ran down his furrowed brow. Athlistan shook free his gauntlet and wiped his young face, streaks of black hair sticking fast to his cheeks. Yidara thought his hazel eyes were as beautiful as a flower, yet now their ferocious sight would freeze her heart. Would she ever see that beauty again? Athlistan did not believe he would. Once, the thoughts of battle drove his blood to boil. His hands would ache, yearning for the feel of leather between his fingers.

Pain shot from forearm to shoulder, mauled by fatigue. He licked lips cracked and bleeding as the fires beyond sucked the air from their position, chest heaving against his dented cuirass.

Warhorns blared again with notes hauntingly familiar. Yidara danced across his mind’s eye, dancing and twirling as she played her flute beside the hidden glade they both loved. She would want him to join her there. He wished they had never left.

Too few defenders remained–too few to stem the tide. Athlistan looked back toward where Bordanium’s denizens fought the raging fires spreading across the rooftops. It was folly. They should run, reform, and fight another day. This fight was lost.

Moans filled the air from the dying; those men now engulfed in their final struggle against mortality. Those remaining milled about behind Athlistan with what scraps of shield and spear their failing strength could lift. All eyes fixed upon their captain, waiting…waiting…

Warhorns bellowed in the distance as the enemy reformed.

Another fireball flew overhead. The fires would consume that glade. Maybe not today, but one day, it would. Unless…

Only one option remained.

“For the glade.”

Athlistan lifted his sword from the stones.

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

A/N

If you've enjoyed this, please leave a like and an insight below. If you really enjoyed this, tips to fuel my coffee addiction are always appreciated. All formatting is designed for desktops. All my works can be found below:

Short StoryMicrofictionHistoricalFantasyClassicalAdventure
32

About the Creator

Matthew Fromm

Full-time nerd, history enthusiast, and proprietor of random knowledge. The best way to find your perfect story is to write it yourself.

Here there be dragons, and knights, and castles, and quests for entities not wishing to be found.

Reader insights

Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

Top insights

  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

  2. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

Add your insights

Comments (21)

Sign in to comment
  • Mark Gagnon10 days ago

    Your tale reminded me of the 300. Great storytelling and congrats on Top Story!

  • Novel Allen10 days ago

    Always another war to be fought. So sad the minds of men. Congrats

  • Congrats on your top story.

  • Anna 12 days ago

    Congrats on your Top Story!

  • Epic and truly incredible fantasy prose

  • Beautiful imagery! Congrats on top story!

  • Gabriel Huizenga13 days ago

    Absolutely epic storytelling- I feel I can hear the music swelling with this great final (?) stand!! Congrats on Top Story! :)

  • Jarrett Smith13 days ago

    felt like I was right there beside your main character, getting ready for the siege. Great imagery and storytelling!

  • Belle14 days ago

    Congratulations on Top Story!

  • Brin J.14 days ago

    The way you described things with such simplistic graphic visuals really brought the imagery to life. I could envision everything without feeling overwhelmed by the details :).

  • angela hepworth14 days ago

    Your use of detail and vocabulary throughout are so good!! I found myself immersed immediately. Congrats on an amazing top story!

  • Lamar Wiggins14 days ago

    Once again you come through with a fantastic tale that transported me right in the thick of it with great word choices. Congrats, Matt!

  • Congratulations on your top story.

  • BrettNotGreg14 days ago

    Great storytelling! Fantastic imagery!

  • Donna Fox (HKB)14 days ago

    I feel this daunting sensation for what the MC must overcoming and has already done, that sense of dread as they must march into a losing battle but hold their heads up high doing it!! Great work here Matthew and congrats on Top Story!!

  • JBaz14 days ago

    You brought his exhaustion to the forefront o felt his weary mess and disparity. Yet a twinge of hope however faint keeps me wanting more. Excellent and congratulations

  • Hannah Moore14 days ago

    I don't know if it's me or the writing, but I feel so weary reading this.

  • Christy Munson14 days ago

    Your tenderly rendered, rich detailed story lingers on the page long after Athlistan lifts sword from stone to rejoin the battle that has taken so much already. The vividness with which you tell it makes me truly see the scene, and your word choice makes me feel transported to another time. Brilliantly conveyed writing! I noted one maybe typo. Do you mean to capitalize "He"? "a harbinger of what was to come, He removed his helm". Again, wonderful storytelling!

  • This comment has been deleted

  • Ameer Bibi14 days ago

    Your storytelling style is very amazing or impressive beautifully captivating the world

  • "This narrative is enriched by its strong exposition and meticulously detailed descriptions. From the beginning, I was drawn into a captivating world brought to life through vivid imagery and immersive storytelling. This was a truly thrilling read."

  • D. J. Reddall14 days ago

    How many have fought for a glad, green memory? Yours is a moving tale.

Find us on social media

Miscellaneous links

  • Explore
  • Contact
  • Privacy Policy
  • Terms of Use
  • Support

© 2024 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.